Hi Angie, these look nice. This is my 3rd time trying to comment because it keep not going throrugh so hopefully you don't see this 3 times lol Anyways, I think you should change Shannon now to match Don and Jack because she is still looking cartoony. Also, if you do this, could you incorporate the design we have established for her, such as her short hair? Also, I really think you should consider using the gesture that Lucie suggested for Shannon on the part where she and Jack are at the piano. And maybe close her mouth too otherwise people may get confused on who is talking. Lastly, the part where Don is telling Jack he doesn't feel good enough still looks cartoony, but in a different way. I think this is because his head is a little too big for his body. Other than that, they have come a long way. Good job :)
Hi Angie, great job on the boards. I'd agree with Joelle's comments - I think the really important thing at this point is to take a look at Joelle's characters and start to incorporate her designs.
Hi Angie, these look nice. This is my 3rd time trying to comment because it keep not going throrugh so hopefully you don't see this 3 times lol Anyways, I think you should change Shannon now to match Don and Jack because she is still looking cartoony. Also, if you do this, could you incorporate the design we have established for her, such as her short hair? Also, I really think you should consider using the gesture that Lucie suggested for Shannon on the part where she and Jack are at the piano. And maybe close her mouth too otherwise people may get confused on who is talking. Lastly, the part where Don is telling Jack he doesn't feel good enough still looks cartoony, but in a different way. I think this is because his head is a little too big for his body. Other than that, they have come a long way. Good job :)
ReplyDeleteHi Angie, great job on the boards. I'd agree with Joelle's comments - I think the really important thing at this point is to take a look at Joelle's characters and start to incorporate her designs.
ReplyDeleteThanks for all your hard work!