Hi Angie! Your drawings are looking nice! I think both the characters need to be aged up, but I realize you can't do that by Wednesday, haha.
One drawing I think you could fix though is the one below:
I think she should look more proud of herself. You can do that by arching her back in a confident way:
(sorry I couldn't post this as a comment to your post, but I couldn't post the picture that way) ^_^
Yeah I agree, I think that would be a good pose choice. The other thing that stood out to me was the shot where he is smiling after he starts playing. hehe I dunno, maybe he looks a little too crazy/joker'y? That might need to be changed so he looks a little more sheepish, or annoyed.
ReplyDeleteAwesome! thank you. I will get on that.
ReplyDeleteThe "smile" is in a crazed sense of mind. Gregg told me that is the moment where Don is about to snap. So I had him grind his teeth with a crazed look.
ReplyDeleteI will revisit that drawing as well to make sure he doesnt look so demonic.